It
was Valentine’s Day 2010. An extremely useless holiday if you ask me but since
it fell on a Sunday this particular year I didn’t have to worry about walking
around seeing everyone at school with their flowers and candy and bears, galore.
I was a senior in high school ready to get out and leave my mark on the world
or as I now know, do a bunch of cramming and take a lot of naps. I was living
in what my dad referred to as “the sticks”, Virginia. I don’t know how he
concluded that this was any better than where he grew up because by all
definitions of the word, “the sticks” North Carolina wasn’t any better. In
actuality we only lived a good 40 minutes outside of northern Virginia, a huge
bustling suburb of Washington D.C. but Winchester was its own little world
complete with run down mall and mediocre restaurants, but there was something
scenic about the place, maybe that’s why it was voted “best place to retire” by
multiple publications. Nevertheless I looked forward to any reason to get away,
even if it was just for the day.
My
parents informed us that we’d be going to the REAL mall in northern Virginia,
one complete with Forever 21, Macy’s, MAC cosmetics, and a plethora of other stores,
which I was so deeply deprived of where I lived. Even better was the fact that
we’d also be going to the Cheesecake factory for dinner, somewhere we’d never
been, but idea of any place selling 30+ types of cheesecake most certainly had
me sold. This was going to be the best Valentines Day ever. Just shopping,
Food, family, and cheesecake what could go wrong?
Upon
arriving at the huge beautiful mall with bright lights and white tile floors, multiple
levels, and people galore I was in heaven. I somehow had to find a way to
squeeze in visiting all the stores I could before our dinner reservation. I
started at MAC and found some new lip-gloss I loved and couldn’t wait to see
what other finds I’d come across. I made it to Forever 21 and almost lost it. Clothes,
and shoes, and jewelry everywhere! It was a dream and I didn’t even know where
to start. Oh how the excitement raced through me, in that moment I was the
proverbial kid in the candy store.
Only 10 minutes into my visit to Forever my phone starts ringing, it’s
my mom. “Now what could she possibly want this soon” I think to myself. “We have to leave now meet us by the
car.” She tells me when I pick-up. “Are you serious but we JUST go here, I
haven’t even had time to look.” “MEET us at the car.” This time she says with
more emphasis. It is at this point I know something serious has happened but
she won’t tell me over the phone.
Wow. I was left completely hanging by this and now am dying to know what happened, so I think you made a really good choice as to where to cut this, even if it is driving me crazy. I like how you kept it really light throughout the piece, making it so I didn't expect the serious ending at all. Although I knew something was going to ruin it, I figured it'd be something silly. I think this is really well done.
ReplyDeleteI want to read more! Your article reminds me of myself on Valentines Day (I too think it is a stupid holiday). I usually hang with my family that day too!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your descriptions of the mall, and your reaction to it. It made the whole beginning pretty funny and light, your description of "kid in a candy store" was pretty apt. Like Shelby, I didn't see the ending coming and really wanted to find out what happened. It was also surprisingly sad how you didn't get to completely live out your mall trip (I live in "the sticks" too so I know what the excitement of going into civilization is like).
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